请以"My Clas ... ate"为题目写一篇记述文需要:1、主题明白。言语流利。思绪明晰。 2、字数在100字以内。思绪点拨写记述文要依照事物开展的主观法令叙说,所叙说的内容要交代清楚,条理明晰,重点突出,主次明显,详略切当。这篇文章也是记述文,客人公应该用第三人称,时态以普经过去时为主。本文以客人公为核心线索,以一、两件事情为重点内容去组织资料,反映客人公的笼统特色。整个内容情节要合情正当,有实在感,叙说时可按事情开展的顺序启动,同时加以点评。参考范文My Clas ... ateLiu Kai is my clas ... ate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was ing towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
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